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  1. MMD · April 5, 2016

    Gianna, I love the revision you did on this piece! It is much more ambiguous the way you’ve rewritten it. While the poem itself is short and much remains unexplained, it speaks volumes. Very well written and well done.

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  2. rupoems · April 17, 2016

    Although this poem is very short, after reading it I thought about it a lot. There is so much meaning behind these three little lines and you did a great job making them short but powerful. The picture that went along with this poem was also a perfect choice, good job (: !

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